Tips??

I'm recently working on a book called "Finding a Way". I LOVE to write, but I was wondering if anyone out there had some tips for me.....???

Here's a sample from my book:

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My shoes made a rhythmic crunching sound as they cracked the small grains of dry soil I trod on. I fell into their even beats and slowly seeped into a trance. Between the summer heat, flesh eating insects, and salty drops of sweat pouring from my brow into the corners of my parched mouth, I found myself longing to be anywhere else than where I was at that tiring moment. There were no clouds, no shade, no breeze. Only the feeling of bitter exhaustion and light headed weariness. As I continued on, my thoughts drifted back to that one day...that one, cool, merry spring morning when 'She' showed up. It was a pleasant, yet uncomfortable memory, and it seemed to be the only thing my mind would ponder as I walked. I remember everything...

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Let me know your thoughts in "comments"
~ xo

"My B-day" pics:

Here are some random photos from my birthday party. Thought you would like to see them. ~ xo

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Can't have a party without taking some silly pics of yourself!

LOL:

Super Star

(NOT!..Loti)

Like, Peace!

(lol)

Hi

xo

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Pretty colors

My gifts

(Sunglasses, Gum, Hair straightener, Eye Shadow, Color Lip Palette, and Lip gloss

Cute sisters

The cake after the party......

Yum!

xo

Family

xo

Tasty Fizz!

Sea of sprinkles 

Everything's in place......accept for the people.....?

Birthday fun

xo

YUUUUUMMY!

(me and my cake)

xoxoxox

Survey!

I couldn't really figure out what to type...so I made up a survey for you guys!
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Well.........Here you go:

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1.) If you could be any person, who would you be?

2.) If you had a choice between:
a. Friends
or
b. Family

What would you choose?

3.) Which movie is better?
a. Lord of the Rings
b. Narnia
c. Inkheart
d. Pirates of the Caribbean
e. Alice in Wonderland (the new one)
f. Star Wars

4.) If you could bring one character to life (out of a movie...book...or video game...etc.) Who would it be?

5.) What's one thing you hate?

6.) What do you love most?

"Inkheart"

I just watched this awesome movie called "Inkheart". It's basically about this guy named, Mo, who can bring things (and people) out of books!!!!
It's soooo cool! If you're a fan of "Lord of the Rings" and "Narnia" than you'll LOVE this movie as much as I did! It's a "must see"!!!!

I Love....

I'm really lovin' my summer ~ xo
So much fun!

Everything is so.....hot. It was, like, 108 degrees a few days ago! Seriously! And today, it was about 90 something. And I'm lovin' it!!!! (But right now I'm so tan it's almost embarrassing....LOL)
Who else out there in the big world of cyberspace loves summer? Almost everyone I'm sure! (Accept for the dear people in Alaska...gee...this would be like a giant oven for them! Lwit!)

I think one of the best things in the world is a pool on a summer day! (As long as it's not raining). Sometimes I feel bad for life-guards though...they just sit up there in their chairs baking while they wait for someone to sink or yell "I'm drownin'!!!!" (loti!) Poor guys...the life guards I mean. Don't worry I feel bad for mister "I'M DROWNIN'!" too ~ xo (lol)


(What do you like about summer?.........)


Anyhoo...My summer actually went by pretty fast this year. I don't know why though. Maybe the more you have to do, the faster times flies...probably. Because with my superior intelligence I'm usually correct......(NOT....loti!)

....................I've shared my wisdom long enough I think........... Farewell my fellow cyberspace travelers! Till Our next meeting!


(That'll be 5 bucks by the way....my wisdom is not free...............LOL)

Answer...

Here's the answer to my "chicken" question:


"The OUTSIDE!!!!!!"



HA HA HA HA HA!!!!

Your HAVE to Vote!!! Please!

LOTR

!!!!!!!!!!!

Question....lol

See if you can figure this out (you probably can,but give me your answer in "comments" anyway ok? ~ xo)


"Which side of a chicken has the most feathers?"

Favorite Character: ???

Vote for your Favorite "Lord of the Rings" Character in comments! (Whichever gets the most votes will be "Character of the Month" for July)

Legolas

Aragorn

Arwen

(Choose 1 of the hobbits) Merry, Sam, Frodo, Pippin

Boromir

Faramir

Steward

 Theoden

Eowyn

Elron

Galadriel

Gimli

Gandalf

Saruman

Bilbo

Gollum

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